25.7.11

Feeling the World Come Alive

I've finished the post-research revision on Judith. Though I took the manuscript with me on vacation, I truly took a vacation for the first time in years and did not touch the story (or give it any conscious thought) until the last day, when we had stopped to visit my writing partner in Virginia on the way back to Kentucky. For the first time in several years, Rita and I could savor our mutual feedback face to face instead of over the phone.

Back home in Louisville, I checked in with my characters, especially Judith herself, to feel what she (and her world) need to come fully alive. Over the last ten days I've been revising . . . the first chapter of the novel. One slow pass, page by page, to make sure each new character is visible as a physical being. Another slow pass to insure that each one is located clearly in space. A third--and a fourth--to allow Judith's sense of faith to saturate all she says and does.

On one of the last posts here I wrote about my sudden (only several decades in the making) insight that revision needs no rushing, and in fact requires us to slow down. Now, as I live that, I cannot describe the joy of switching off my internal clock, the sense that I need to hurry in any way. I am a voracious reader, but for the last ten days or so my character's reality leaves me no time and little interest for other writers' stories. (Though I am compiling a list of books to read when I step out of the cave. Whenever that happens to be!)